A plane leaving from Chicago was destroyed yesterday as it crashed into the ground upon starting its decent into Pittsburgh. Of the 131 passengers on the plane, none survived.
The big news isn't that a plane was destroyed, it's that 131 people were killed in a plane crash ... so that information needs to show up at (or very near) the beginning of your lead, not at the end.
The big news isn't that a plane was destroyed, it's that 131 people were killed in a plane crash ... so that information needs to show up at (or very near) the beginning of your lead, not at the end.
ReplyDelete"decent" is not correct - check the spelling
7/10 - please give it another shot