Tuesday, May 4, 2010
broadcast corrections
FRANK DEWITT, C.E.O. OF NORTHQUEST AIRLINES SAYS,"WE LIKE TO THINK OF IT AS A GIFT TO OUR HOLIDAY CUSTOMERS."
DEPENDING ON TRAVEL DATES, A PASSENGER COULD TRAVEL ROUNDTRIP BETWEEN BOSTON AND SAN FRANCISCO FOR AS LITTLE AS 349-DOLLARS WITH THE DISCOUNTED, NONREFUNDABLE FAIRS.
TICKETS MUST BE PURCHASED BY JULY FIRST FOR TRAVEL BETWEEN NOV. TWENTIETH AND JAN. FIFTH IN THE CONTINENTAL U.S.
BROADCAST STORY #1
1 MIN.
OF THE THOUSANDS OF COMMUTERS THAT TAKE HIGHWAY 17 TO SILICON VALLEY EACH DAY, HOW MANY DO YOU THINK EXPECT A HORSE IN THEIR REAR VIEW MIRROR?
STAR, AND WHITE ARABIAN BELONGING TO ATHENA MUZUMDAR, WAS FOUND RUNNING ALONG ONE CALIFORNIA’S BUSIEST HIGHWAYS TODAY. THE ADVENTEROUS HORSE WAS CAUGHT AND BROUGHT TO THE SAN MARTIN ANIMAL SHELTER AFTER DECIDING TO TAKE A QUICK BRAKE IN THE YARD OF A HOUSE ON KENT WAY.
THE ANIMAL SHELTER WAS AT FIRST RELUCTANT TO RETURN THE HORSE TO ITS FAMILY DUE TO WHAT THEY FIRST THOUGHT WERE SIGNS OF MISTREATMENT, BUT STAR WAS EVENTUALLY RETURNED WHEN IT WAS DISCOVERED THAT HE WAS RECOVERING FROM PREVIOUSE HEALTH ISSUES.
WHEN ASKED ABOUT HOW SHE FELT ABOUT HER HORSE’S SAFE RETURN, MUZUMDAR REPLIED, “I WAS REALLY SCARED FOR HIM.”
broadcast lead #2
30 SEC.
RICHMOND WAS HOST TO A TRAGIC ACCIDENT TODAY.
TWO PEDESTRIAN WERE STRUCK AND KILLED BY AN AMTRAK TRAIN EARLIER TODAY NEAR CARLSON BOULEVARD AND OHIO AVENUE AT AROUND 1:40 P.M.. THE 39 PASSENGERS ABOURD THE TRAIN, THAT WAS TTRAVELLING FROM OAKLAND TO BAKERSFEILD, WERE ESCORTED ON FOOT TO THE NEAREST STATION AND BOARDED ANOTHER TRAIN. AS OF NOW, THE VICTIMS RAMAIN TO BE IDENTIFIED.
Saturday, April 24, 2010
soft lead
Mabel McCullough was celebrating the 27th of September, her birthday, with friends, family, and carrot cake with enough candles on it to set off her fire alarm and send a whole squad of firemen rushing to her door. I don’t believe either party expected to see what they did when those firemen entered the house.
"Test Yourself" exercise 1
b) Police have issued an arrested warrant for Rocky Beach, a man wanted for the attempted murder of his wife, who is currently recovering from the attack at Providence Hospital.
c)Ever wonder how to get rid of foot odor? Because scientist a the Cooper State University Food Sciences Laboratory recently discovered that eating more beets can reduce foot odor by 50 percent.
Topical Blog Post 2
I am not one of those people who believe that there was a “golden age” of film. It is a fact of life that whenever something is considered a masterpiece of its given media that there must be others that are inferior, but Hollywood has strayed a long way from the days of Gone With the Wind and Citizen Kane. So far, in fact, that it is becoming increasingly difficult to pick out the good films from the constant flow of mind numbing commercialism that passes off as a feature film. In summary, the problem with Hollywood is not that they are making so many bad films, but that they are not making enough good ones, and this changes what the world idea of a “good film” is.
The event that sparked this notion in me was when James Cameron’s Avatar was nominated for several academy awards. This is a film that, by all means, should be considered mediocre by the standards of the academy. It had a recycled plot and average acting that was only backed up by the sheer amounts of money Cameron threw into the special effects portion of his “masterpiece”. If I wanted to watch this movie again I would rent Dances With Wolves, a far superior film made for less than 1/15th of Avatar’s budget.
Films are an art form, and one that should be respected. A film is not made great by the names that appear in the credits or the amount of money that is thrown into it. Films are made great when someone puts their emotions and thought and ideas onto film. I sincerely hope that Hollywood realizes this by the time I graduate.
Saturday, April 17, 2010
lead identification
This is a descriptive/scene-setter lead.
CANDACE FLEMING’S résumé boasts a double major in industrial engineering and English from Stanford, an M.B.A. from Harvard, a management position at Hewlett-Packard and experience as president of a small software company.
But when she was raising money for Crimson Hexagon, a start-up company she co-founded in 2007, she recalls one venture capitalist telling her that it didn’t matter that she didn’t have business cards, because all they would say was “Mom.” (
Out of the Loop in Silicon Valley - Clair Cain Miller, New York Times)
this is a contrast lead.
Focus Story Structure
Stenhoff played for his high school football team until he cracked his vertebrae during one of his games. He ran head first into the chest of the ball carrier and cracked several vertebrae in his spine, causing paralysis and confining him to a wheelchair. The injury left him unable to graduate with his class, and he is now trying to graduate by taking correspondence classes.
Although this story is tragic, it is also far more common than most people would expect. There are roughly 20,000 football related injuries in high schools across the country each year. Thirty-five percent of those injuries are head and neck injuries, and twelve percent leave the players permanently disabled.
Saturday, April 10, 2010
magazine project memo
To: Cynthia McCune
From: Nathaniel Morotti, Student
Re: Magazine Project
cc: file
As you know, the magazine article project will be due in a few short weeks, so I am writing to inform you that I will be doing an in-depth analysis and review of the film Shutter Island.
The reason I chose this topic to do my project on is because I wish to some day be a syndicated film critic. I believe that this project will give me the best practice for this type of writing.
I will talk about the various filming techniques and devices used in the film, then move on to the actual plot structure, and then finally give an opinion on the quality of the film.
I hope that this is an acceptable topic to write about. If it is not, please notify me.
Topical Blog Post
People who know me know that I complain about a lot of things, most of which are quite arbitrary, but I cannot stand to hear about the personal problems of a celebrity. When I listen to the news I want to learn something. I want to find out how the world is doing, not listen to a constant feed of gossip and babble. Ever since I decided to become a student of Journalism, I have been paying attention to the news with an intensity that I did not have in high school, and that intensity has made me realize just how pointless these celebrity news stories are, and it has made me very uncomfortable not only with the state of modern journalism, but also with the state of mind of the American people.
Americans need to realize that distracting themselves from the blatantly obvious problems of their country is not the proper way of to handle the situation. Unless we can learn to pay less attention to what color Lindsay Lohan dyed her hair and pay more attention to why CEO’s are getting million dollar raises, then we might not have a chance as a country or a culture.
Wednesday, March 31, 2010
Ethics questions
2. Yes, I would take the job as an orderly. If the occupants of the nursing home are being subjected to substandard living conditions the public has a right to know and to stop it from continuing.
3. Whether it was from a written source or a website, I would always give credit to the point of origin, otherwise it is plagiarism.
From E-mail: I would not reveal the name of the teacher that is being accused. Nothing in the scenario confirmed that the professor actually harassed the student, so revealing his name without hard evidence would be libelous.
Friday, March 26, 2010
Magazine
Game Informer is a video game oriented magazine that, as one would expect, is most geared to be appealing towards young people, usually male, that have an interest in buying and playing video games. The magazine usually consists of three segments. The first segment is made up of editor letters responding to fan questions. The next portion is primarily article written by the magazine staff about upcoming video game releases and events. The last section of the magazine is made up of reviews of video games that have recently been released for sale.
website: http://gameinformer.com/Default.aspx
Copy Edit the World: part Deux
Source: Jour61 textbook. All letters of the title should not be capitalized. 4 points
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Source: MCom70 Midterm. It should be 50s, not '50s. 4 points
Source: Mcom70 assignment handout. The number 1 should be spelled out as "One". 4 points
Source: Eng22 assignment sheet. The 'c' of the word 'choose' should be capitalized. 4 points
Saturday, March 20, 2010
Math for Journalists
B) Each of the sources has it’s own importance, but most people would be surprised to learn that a lot of the funding does not come from the students.
C) Although most students would like to believe that the university’s funding is coming directly from their pockets, student tuition only makes up a very small amount of a university’s budget. The majority of school money actually comes from the state government. A large amount also comes from donations and gifts to the school.
2. A) the average sentence for prisoners convicted of aggravated assault is 1 year and 10 months.
B)84, 14,12,12,12,12,8. The Median of the prison sentences for prisoners convicted of aggravated assault is 12 months.
C) The median number is the most accurate in this instance because the average was thrown of by larger sentence of the inmate Michael Reese
3. A)The state sales tax for California is 8.25%
B) If restaurants were to become exempt from state sales tax, fast food patrons who spend five dollars on fast food once a week for a year would save $21.32.
C) Fast food patron who spend 20 dollars once a week for a year would save $85.80
Sunday, March 14, 2010
AP exercises s-z
2) Ben really knows his scriptures, but he knows little about the Talmoud or the Shariah. (3)
3) Her home in upstate New York is surprisingly ultra modern and unique for its middle-class neighborhood. (4)
4) Veteran's Day, the anniversary of the armistice that ended World War I, is celebrated by troupes of former soldiers marching down Main Street carrying US flags. (3)
5) Word-of-mouth has it that Ellen will wind up with the only “A” in the class. (2)
6) When Sara spotted the Louis L'Amour paperback she asked whose book it was. She couldn't believe it was John's. After all, nobody reads westerns anymore. She had no idea he was so wierd. (4)
Got What it takes to be a Reporter?
2.Mostly True - 3pts
3.Not True - 2pts
4.Mostly True - 1pts
5.Mostly True - 3pts
6.Not True - 0pts
7.Mostly True - 2pts
8.Mostly True - 3pts
9.Mostly True - 0pts
10.Not True - 1pts
11.Mostly True - 0pts
12.Mostly True - 3pts
13.Mostly True - 1pts
14.Not True - 2pts
Total = 23pts
My results indicate that I have what it takes to be a good journalist, but i have to change a few things about my attitude on life first. I have to become less shy and more willing to ask questions, I either have to start memorizing or find a way to memorize all the little facts, and I have to really focus on improving my work ethic when it comes to turning in assignments on time.
Saturday, March 6, 2010
AP exercises I-M
2) Ever since she joined the U.S. Navy on June 15, 2005, she has been a vocal proponent of Navel practices and policies. (3)
3) It was a one-sided game, and he was a poor loser. After losing the playoff when his ball went out of bounds, he made an off-color remark that could be heard in the stands. (4)
4) Hundreds of people attended Sundays race to watch the 75 top-cyclists peddle across the finish line. (4)
5) Every summer the Jones' and the Kinneys' would pour over travel brochures, planning their winter trip together. This year they are hoping to vacation in Panama City. (4)
6) The five-year-old girl was born in Canton, Ohio, but now she lives in Fremont, Calif. (3)
"Bright" news (revised)
All trains running on the Metro-North railways were shut down yesterday after a squirrel walking on the power lines caused an electrical surge, taking down the power for the whole railway. According to a spokeswoman from Metro-North Railways the squirrel had apparently been electrocuted, causing a power surge that weakened one of the overhead brackets on the railway. This caused one of the electrical wires to dangle, where it then became snagged on one of the trains passing beneath it, ripping the whole cluster of electrical lines down. This caused a massive power failure to the train systems.
Due to the power failure, the trains that usually carry the 47,000 commuters to and from Manhattan were stopped dead, leaving many a person angry and confused as to what had happened to their Monday afternoon transportation.
News Story 5 - revised
A 10-wheel transport truck hauling asphalt crashed on Moeser Lane today after the driver lost control of the vehicle. The truck finally stopped as it crashed into the side of a house, causing the truck to ignite into flames. The truck’s driver was rescued by Detective Sgt. Shawn Maples of the El Cerrito Police Force, who was one of the first to arrive on the scene. Maples found the driver in the debris after he heard him calling for help. Maples, with the help of his fellow rescue workers, was able to pull the man from the overturned vehicle. "We dragged him out in a heartbeat while the truck went up in flames. I just wanted to get him out of there." Said Maples. The driver, who had broken both of his legs in the accident, was taken to John Muir Medical Center, where he remains in serious yet stable condition.
There were several other injuries in the crash. One of the cars, a Honda sedan, had been crushed, trapping its driver inside. Rescue workers were able to save the driver by removing the roof of the car and pulling the driver to safety. Another vehicle, this one carrying a man and a young boy, was forced off the road, crashing the car into the some bushes.
The Crash was heard throughout the neighborhood. "First, I thought it was a major earthquake. This is unbelievable.", said Ruben Sharma, a neighbor to the house the truck had crashed into. Although several people were injured and massive damage was done to the neighborhood, there have not been any deaths.
Sunday, February 28, 2010
Copy Edit the World
Taken from a community activity brochure
Should read: Mixed Doubles Tournament results. (the 'R' is results does not need to be capitalized.) (4 pts.)
Taken from a community activity brochure
Should Read: 4400 Jade St., Capitola (4 pts)
Taken from a Restaurant Menu
It Should read: 2400 Porter St.,Soquel (4 pts)
AP I-L
2) He was indicted for assault, but his lawyer said the case against him circumstantial and she is sure the inquiry will exonerate him. (2)
3) He knows it isn’t kosher, but green Jello is his favorite dessert. This admission has prompted his friends to question both his taste and his judgment. (3)
4) Now that he has DSL, he finds it much easier to go online to check his e-mail and download files. (3)
5) He stood at the lectern, addressing his long time colleagues at The Knights of Columbus. (3)
news story 4 - (revised)
The section of the city was blocked off by police after a construction crew that was working to repair a broken sewer line accidentally ruptured a high-pressure gas lane with one of their back hoes. The sudden evacuation of the area, which covers both Folsom and 11th street, caused traffic to come to a stand-still on neighboring roads.
The evacuation also had an effect on the South of Market businesses, causing many shops to lose customers when they were instructed to leave the area. "Ask my customers. They were pretty irate." says Carlann Lauria, manager of Crocker’s Lockers, a local self storage business, who was forced to have her employees move around the perimeter of the barricade, collecting checks from annoyed customers. Other businesses were forced to cut their losses, such as the Wa-Ha-Ka restaurant, which suffered around $500 in lost revenue, as reported by the manager, Samantha Feldman.
The gas line was repaired at 5:09 p.m., leaving the area shut down for close to six hours.
News Story 3 - (revised)
The victim, Robert Kent, a San Jose resident who is described as in his 50s and retired by San Jose Fire Captain Robert Piper, was found unconscious on his kitchen floor by the rescue team sent into the house. Captain Piper said that Kent had received both second and third-degree burns on almost half of his body. After his rescue, Kent was transported to Valley Medical Center in San Jose, where a nursing supervisor said that his condition was grave.
The fire was report at roughly 3 p.m., and appeared to have started in the kitchen, working its way up through the house and into the attic. According to Piper, the cause of the fire is currently under investigation.
Saturday, February 20, 2010
Top News: Tiger Woods Apology (is not really news)
Friday, February 19, 2010
AP exercises E-H
News Story 2 - revised
The 24-year-old driver had been driving early in the morning on highway 1 when he was distracted by thick fog. The drivers impaired vision caused him to drive off a cliff as he was driving along Devil’s Slide. The vehicle flew off the road and plummeted down the 150 foot drop. Through sheer luck, the car was able to land on its wheels, preventing the roof from crushing the driver. The young man used his cell phone to dial 911 and call for help.
News Story 1
Saturday, February 13, 2010
FOG calculation
Top News: Kentucky bill 'Okay' to Nuclear Waste
AP exercises A-D
Leads 5
Leads 4
Leads 3
Saturday, February 6, 2010
Top News: Murderer in Tiller Trial found Guilty
Although the media has long left this case out of limelight, it is still one of the most important cases to ever cross the American Legal system. When I look at this case I have to think about what would have happened to the way the legal system is run if Roeder’s “Preemptive Attack” defense had won. If it had suddenly become okay to commit crimes in the hopes that they would stop other crimes, what kind of chaos would the legal system look like? It is also worthy to think about what kind of message this case has sent to anyone who has ever protested anything, let alone abortion. “I don’t believe in the same things you do, so I’m going to kill you.” That is the real message Scott Roeder said to the world when he killed George Tiller, but thanks to the recent actions of the court, that message has been countered.
Leads 2
A plane leaving from Chicago was destroyed yesterday as it crashed into the ground upon starting its decent into Pittsburgh. Of the 131 passengers on the plane, none survived.