Tuesday, May 4, 2010

broadcast corrections

NORTHQUEST AIRLINES ANNOUNCED TODAY THAT IT IS CUTTING ITS DOMESTIC FAIRES BY UP TO 40% FOR HOLIDAY TRAVELERS.

FRANK DEWITT, C.E.O. OF NORTHQUEST AIRLINES SAYS,"WE LIKE TO THINK OF IT AS A GIFT TO OUR HOLIDAY CUSTOMERS."

DEPENDING ON TRAVEL DATES, A PASSENGER COULD TRAVEL ROUNDTRIP BETWEEN BOSTON AND SAN FRANCISCO FOR AS LITTLE AS 349-DOLLARS WITH THE DISCOUNTED, NONREFUNDABLE FAIRS.

TICKETS MUST BE PURCHASED BY JULY FIRST FOR TRAVEL BETWEEN NOV. TWENTIETH AND JAN. FIFTH IN THE CONTINENTAL U.S.

1 comment:

  1. Every broadcast story needs a slug and time signature.

    * FARES (not FAIRES)
    * 40 PERCENT
    * C-E-O (also, put the title before his name, not after)
    * FARES (not FAIRS)
    * Spell out the months (no one says "NOV.")
    * IN THE CONTINENTAL U-S (or UNITED STATES)

    7/14

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