Saturday, February 13, 2010

Leads 3

Lead 3a: One person was killed and three others were injured today in a supermarket parking lot when a construction truck suffered mechanical failure and crashed into a group of vehicles.

Leads 3b: A young motorist survived a 150 foot fall today after losing control of his vehicle and drove off a cliff on highway 1. He was Taken to San Francisco General Hospital despite only suffering minor head injuries.

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  1. AnonymousFebruary 16, 2010 at 4:16 PM

    3a) Good, except I don't think vehicles can be "unsuspecting." 4.5/5
    3b) First, it was an accident, not a stunt. (This story is dramatic enough on its own -- you don't need to jazz it up.) I can't tell from this whether he just fell off the cliff ... or if he was in his car at the time. 2.5/5

    7/10

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